Too much drama, too much angst, too much miscommunication, and not enough movement forward made HIATUS by L.A. Witt more of a chore than a delight.

Though the writing in Running with Scissors by L.A. Witt is superb, there's something missing for us.

The latest in L.A. Witt and Aleksandr Voinov's Market Garden series, On the Clock, is full of sex but lacking in plot.